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I tried so hard
and i couldn't get it to work!
I tried to give him gifts,
I tried to give him praise,
I tried all i could think of,
but he ignored whatever i said.

I finally gave up and then,
by some miraculous feat,
he finally talked to me.

It was after my performance
(by Ultimate's request)
that I went back to my room
and lie down on the bed.
I wondered what they thought of it,
but more specifically him.
I was still thinking about it
when he surprisingly walked in.

'Iloved your performance'
he offered with a smile,
'and if you wouldn't mind
i'd like to speak with you awhile.'
I smiled bright and gave a nod,
offered him a seat.
We sat to chat together,
and i consider that quite a feat.
this is one of the early meetings of Nej and Yashii. Nej being the speaker. i was actually told that my poetry was trash today...such support. another reason why poetry is evil: the critics are worse.
con criticsm is welcome!

act 6 of 'L.K.L's Program Book - a Curior project'
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